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model/photographer///Emilie :iconvintageloving:
manipulator///me

///Merci merci Emilie :aww:

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Very neat. I was wondering what the impact would have been if the feet were at 45 degrees down the steps and the hips in line with the rest of the body, possibly with one step between. I am not so sure that the black ultra-high heels work in this case. They struck me as out of place with respect to the other garments and acted as a second focus point detracting away from the model's upper half. I am not sure what the overall impact was that you were going for, but possibly the shoes should have been bright red. That said, I think this is very cool. Good art.
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Wow, its nice!
What about viewing my portfolio [link]
and adding something to your favs

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Woah ! Super ! J'aime beaucoup :aww:

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